http://yiwrite.com Now The Answers Will Come Wed, 04 Aug 2010 03:06:19 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0 http://yiwrite.com/it-is-written/finding-her-own-way/comment-page-1/#comment-29 Linda Fri, 22 Jan 2010 23:00:25 +0000 http://yiwrite.com/?page_id=394#comment-29 “Finding Her Own Way” keeps right in tune with your other writings about “Mama”. It’s a story line that keeps me interested and wanting to find out more. The tone of your writings of “Mama” are consistent. You remain focused on the internal feelings of your subject and you define them with clarity and mental vision. The title of the writing describes the entire piece perfectly and the last sentence mentally defines its reason. “Finding Her Own Way” keeps right in tune with your other writings about “Mama”. It’s a story line that keeps me interested and wanting to find out more. The tone of your writings of “Mama” are consistent. You remain focused on the internal feelings of your subject and you define them with clarity and mental vision. The title of the writing describes the entire piece perfectly and the last sentence mentally defines its reason.

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